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		<title>Great Tips On How To Improve Your Real Estate Marketing</title>
		<link>http://www.genyre.com/2010/03/15/great-tips-on-how-to-improve-your-real-estate-marketing/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Mar 2010 10:37:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Greg  Vincent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Last week I presented at A Morning with Australia and New Zealand’s Top Agents and had the absolute pleasure to catch up with my friend Julie Ryan, whom I regard as one of the world&#8217;s best real estate trainers.
When connecting with Julie on LinkedIn, I happened to notice one of her recent presentations was available [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last week I presented at <a title="A Morning with Australia and New Zealand’s Top Agents" href="http://www.reuncut.com/topachievers.php" target="_blank">A Morning with Australia and New Zealand’s Top Agents</a> and had the absolute pleasure to catch up with my friend<a title="Julie Ryan" href="http://julieryan.net/" target="_blank"> Julie Ryan</a>, whom I regard as one of the world&#8217;s best real estate trainers.</p>
<p>When connecting with <a title="Julie Ryan on LinkedIn" href="http://au.linkedin.com/in/julieryanspeaker" target="_blank">Julie on LinkedIn</a>, I happened to notice one of her recent presentations was available on SlideShare and thought I&#8217;d share some of Julie&#8217;s insights with GenYre = energy readers.</p>
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<p>Whilst I appreciate that the <a title="SlideShare" href="http://slideshare.net" target="_blank">SlideShare</a> presentation isn&#8217;t anywhere near as effective as it would be with Julie presenting it, I believe that you can still gain a lot out of her presentation slides.</p>
<p>There are some great points that Julie shares about appearing different in your market place. She is also a big believer in using the internet more effectively to help build your profile and make the right first impression.</p>
<p>Julie has also included some very interesting stats about Social Media and a great insight into Dominant Buyer Motives,  plus lots more&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Real Estate Copywriting: The Lighter Side.</title>
		<link>http://www.genyre.com/2009/12/03/real-estate-copywriting-the-lighter-side/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Dec 2009 11:07:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kirsty Dunphey</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[(WILL and GRACE are eating lunch, while reading the apartment ads.)
WILL: $2,900 for a loft in Noho. $2,300 for a loft in Soho.
GRACE: It&#8217;s too much to pay for any&#8230; &#8216;ho.
WILL: OK, here: &#8220;Charming one bedroom, Chelsea adjacent, well-maintained, $1,500.&#8221; Sounds great.
GRACE: OK, let me decode: &#8220;Charming&#8221;? Tiny. &#8220;Chelsea adjacent&#8221;? New Jersey. &#8220;Well-maintained&#8221;? Super washes [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p align="justify"><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small">(WILL and GRACE are eating lunch, while reading the apartment ads.)<br />
<em>WILL:</em> $2,900 for a loft in Noho. $2,300 for a loft in Soho.<br />
<em>GRACE:</em> It&#8217;s too much to pay for any&#8230; &#8216;ho.<br />
<em>WILL:</em> OK, here: &#8220;Charming one bedroom, Chelsea adjacent, well-maintained, $1,500.&#8221; Sounds great.<br />
<em>GRACE:</em> OK, let me decode: &#8220;Charming&#8221;? Tiny. &#8220;Chelsea adjacent&#8221;? New Jersey. &#8220;Well-maintained&#8221;? Super washes blood off sidewalk daily.</span></span></span></p>
<p>I giggled to myself as I watched this scene from television’s Will and Grace last night.</p>
<p>What does the public really think we mean when we write our advertisements?</p>
<p><a href="http://www.genyre.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/Real-Estate-Copywriting.jpg"><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-455" title="Real-Estate-Copywriting" src="http://www.genyre.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/Real-Estate-Copywriting.jpg" alt="Real-Estate-Copywriting" width="425" height="282" /></a>Check out this “decoding” from:<br />
<a href="http://seattlepi.nwsource.com/local/340482_listing20.html"> </a><a title="http://seattlepi.nwsource.com/local/340482_listing20.html " href="http://seattlepi.nwsource.com/local/340482_listing20.html " target="_blank">http://seattlepi.nwsource.com/local/340482_listing20.html </a></p>
<p><em>Very quiet interior:</em> You can barely hear the freeway with the windows shut.<br />
<em>Convenient to shopping:</em> Next to a strip mall.<br />
<em>Convenient to freeway:</em> Next to the onramp.<br />
<em>2+ bedrooms:</em> The room in the basement isn&#8217;t a legal bedroom but, well, you know.<br />
<em>Seller has left you to your own imagination:</em> Hasn&#8217;t been updated since 1940.<br />
<em>Great bones:</em> You&#8217;ll need to tear it down to the studs.<br />
<em>Build some sweat equity:</em> See &#8220;great bones.&#8221;<br />
<em>Charming:</em> Small.<br />
<em>Cozy:</em> Tiny.<br />
<em>Cute:</em> Small and fussy.<br />
<em>Dollhouse, adorable:</em> Nauseatingly cute.<br />
<em>Turnkey:</em> Just overhauled, complete with granite countertops and stainless-steel appliances.<br />
<em>Unique:</em> Remodeled by someone on acid.<br />
<em>Handyman special:</em> Bring boots.<br />
<em>Walk to Fremont:</em> Fremont&#8217;s 20 blocks away.<br />
<em>Motivated seller:</em> They need to sell before they default on their mortgage.<br />
<em>Dirty, ugly, smelly:</em> Dirty, ugly, smelly.</p>
<p>And Barbara Corcoran has her say here about the most misleading words in real estate (and what they really mean)</p>
<ol><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"></p>
<li><em>Cozy</em> (too small)</li>
<li><em>Charming</em> (too old)</li>
<li><em>Original condition</em>(appliances are 50 years old)</li>
<li><em>Needs TLC</em> (it’s a dump)</li>
<li><em>Conveniently located</em> (noisy)</li>
<li><em>Desirable neighborhood</em> (this little house has been way overpriced because the neighborhood has some snob appeal)</li>
<li><em>Efficient kitchen</em> (too small to fit two adults)</li>
<li><em>One-car garage</em> (you can drive your Chevy in, but can’t get out)</li>
<li><em>Peek at the park/river/mountains</em> (if you angle your mirror just so)</li>
<li><em>Useable land</em> (no trees)</li>
<li><em>Beachfront steal</em> (no hurricane insurance available at any price)</li>
<li><em>Country living</em> (too far from anywhere to drive to work)</li>
<li><em>Must see inside</em> (outside is ugly)</li>
<li><em>Unique</em> (hard to sell)</li>
<li><em>Just available</em> (previous owner just died on the premises, hope you don’t mind)</li>
<p></span></span></span></ol>
<p><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small">(read the full article here: <a href="http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/20215090/"> </a><a title="http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/20215090/ " href="http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/20215090/ " target="_blank">http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/20215090/</a> )</span></span></span></p>
<p>New real estate copywriting website <a href="http://www.reallysold.com/"> www.reallysold.com </a> has some interesting alternatives to over-used clichés with heading suggestions such as:</p>
<ul><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"></p>
<li>A better position than you’ll find in the karma sutra</li>
<li>Dress Circle Locale (but with a mini skirt price!)</li>
<li>Penguins love the cold – but you don’t have to!</li>
<li>Grand Old Dame (the house, not the real estate agent)</li>
<li>Yesterday, let me introduce you to today</li>
<li>Very Viewtiful!</li>
<li>Nature is your Neighbour</li>
<li>Calling Winona Ryder (‘cos this one’s a steal!)</li>
<p></span></span></span></ul>
<p align="justify"><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small">(To try out  <a title=" www.reallysold.com " href=" http://www.reallysold.com " target="_blank">www.reallysold.com</a> for yourself – head to the website, take the 3 minute tour and sign up for a free trial.) The next time you go to put pen to paper, I invite you to take a moment to chuckle about what the public might think you really mean! Life’s too short to write bad advertisements!<br />
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<p align="justify"><span style="font-family: verdana;font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"> <span style="font-size: xx-small"> <em> </em></span><span style="font-size: xx-small"><span style="font-size: x-small"><em>Kirsty Dunphey is an author, speaker and entrepreneur who started her first business at 15, opened her own real estate agency at 21 and retired a self made multi-millionaire at 27. To sign up to Kirsty Dunphey&#8217;s weekly email, go to <a title="www.kirstydunphey.com" href="http://www.kirstydunphey.com" target="_blank">www.kirstydunphey.com</a> </em></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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